Lance Isn’t a Western Name

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In a western mode today. My latest western historical romance, Rowena’s Hellion: The Victorians – Book Two was released last week. Check it out on Amazon or The Wild Rose Press site where the Ebook version is discounted to half price. In order to find names of people in the book, for they came over from England and Scotland, I had to research the names of that time and place. There was a list on one of the sites I went to that named all the people who came in the first emigration to Victoria, Kansas. I stole first and last names, but mixed them all up so they wouldn’t be the real people. The one real name I used was the founder of Victoria, George Grant.

The Victorians - TwoThe following story, which I ran across during other research for a nonfiction article, might well have influenced Larry McMurtry when he wrote the fabulous Lonesome Dove.

Mason Holcomb was scheduled to hang on the gallows at Fort Smith on April 17, 1885. A native of Kentucky, he had migrated to Missouri after being mustered out of the Union Army. He married a woman known only as Miss Bridgeman, and took her to Arkansas where they lived for a while near Jasper in Newton County. From there he moved to Franklin County near Ozark, then migrated into Indian Territory. For seven months prior to the killing that would hand him a hanging sentence, he lived on the Canadian River near McAlester.

Later, folks claimed it was the devil in whiskey that brought about the killing, and it would seem so. For Mason and his friend Siegel Fisher were working in the hay fields and on July 23, the two became intoxicated. Late one evening they started home and on the way Mason killed Fisher. Who knows why? He claimed it was a fight Fisher started that escalated into the killing.There was no witness to the deed, and leaving the body out in the open, Mason fled to his native state of Kentucky. In 1884 he was arrested by a brother of the man he had murdered and taken to Fort Smith for trial.

He pled not guilty, saying that Fisher had a pistol and he pulled it, so the killing was in self-defense. The trial lasted over a week. Because Fisher was shot in the back and there was no evidence of a struggle in the grassy area where the body was found, the jury returned with a guilty verdict.

gallows Ft. Smith

The gallows at Ft. Smith, Arkansas where many a man hung from a rope during the reign of Judge Isaac Parker

I found a list in the same article which told of several outlaws who received “guilty” verdicts, over a period of those few days prior to April 17, 1885 when Holcomb was sentenced to be hanged, and they were commuted to life. Among them was a white man who lived under the name of Blue Duck.

I can see McMurtry, paging through those old records and running across that fascinating name, filing it away somewhere in his writer’s mind and pulling it out when he began to create his characters for Lonesome Dove. Or perhaps he found the name somewhere else, or maybe he simply made it up. Yet I prefer to think he read the same article I did and remembered the name.

In one of my earlier western historical romances, Angels’ Gold, available on Kindle, I used an old telephone directory from the small town of Circleville, Kansas, where the book takes place. Mixing first and last names I came up with some good names that fit the time and the place. Western historical writers have to be careful not to use names like Lance and Dylan, Madison and Shelby. Way too modern and misplaced for the early American West.      Gold and an outlaw rescue Angel



About veldabrotherton

For thirty years I've been a writer. Publication of my work began in 1994 . I'm pleased to have recently settled with Oghma Creative Media as my publisher. My brand is SexyDarkGritty and that applies to my western historical romances, mysteries, women's fiction and horror novels. I recently signed a contract to write westerns again, and what fun it's been working on the first one. If I weren't writing my life wouldn't be so exciting.
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6 Responses to Lance Isn’t a Western Name

  1. Velda, this is interesting. Character’s names are very important.

  2. Miss Velda:
    I thourly enjoyed your writing concerning the names of book members. Are you doing your own publishing or is someone else doing it for you?
    Your friend,
    James M. Copeland

    • James, I’m not doing my own publishing. I was going to go Kindle all the way, till I began to pick up interest from publishers. The Wild Rose Press does my western historical romances, I’ve signed with Oghma Creative Media, a new promo/publishing company for four books, the first of which is the mainstream Beyond the Moon that has been nominated for a Pulitzer Prize for literary fiction. My mystery series #1 The Purloined Skull is from Oak Tree Press. I like working with small presses.

  3. cjfosdick says:

    Very interesting history, Velda. What is the rule for using actual names of people who lived long ago at a certain location? Is there a statute of limitations that applies–say, over 125 yrs.? Any difference if they are famous or historically important? Some books declare names changed in the front.


    • CJ, you can use anyone’s name if they are dead. Actually you can’t defame the dead, in other words you can’t be sued, however I always change either the first or last name of people who lived the life. If they are famous use their real names and make sure they could have been there at the time. Their real names bring more of a realistic feeling to your fiction. Just don’t have them doing things history shows they couldn’t have done. In Stoneheart’s Woman I had Custer as a character only in that he sired Stoneheart. I went back and checked in history to make sure he could’ve have been where he needed to be to have done the deed. Research is so much fun. Thanks for the comment.

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